"That's torn it!" said Lord Peter Wimsey.
Susan here, and that's a great start for a great book—a Dorothy Sayers mystery, but which one? The Nine Tailors.
The proverbial hook—the first sentence or two that pulls the reader in, catches attention, taps emotion, hints at something fascinating ahead, inviting the reader to find out more. If the first line doesn’t hit the mark, the reader may bow out quickly. Years ago, once I opened a book I would finish it, even if I had to slog through it, but I haven’t done that in a long while. If a book doesn’t catch me in the first few pages, even a chapter, I’m out and on to the next book. Often I’ll go back later and give it another try, for if you just push on, there's often a great read there. Sometimes the hook isn't a sentence--sometimes it's a subtle thing, more than a sentence, a slow build that grows on you. But sometimes the first line is intriguing, enticing, mysterious, magical--a portal to a story that you may never forget.
It was a dark and stormy night.
-- A Wrinkle in Time, Madeline L'Engle
A great book might have a deceptively simple opening line that hints at something about character, situation, setting, mood that draws you in. Sometimes it’s the power or beauty of the author’s voice. Sometimes it’s humor, or an emotion that catches you, or a situation that makes you curious. Simple or complex, hang on—there may be an amazing world within those pages.
In no particular order, well-known and less known, here are some of my favorite opening lines from some of my favorite books . . .
In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit.
--The Hobbit, J.R.R. Tolkein
I write this sitting in the kitchen sink.
I Capture the Castle, Dodie Smith
It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife. -- Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen
Peter Blood, bachelor of medicine and several other things besides, smoked a pipe and tended the geraniums boxed on the sill of his window above Water Lane in the town of Bridgewater.
-- Captain Blood, Rafael Sabatini
When the east wind blows up Helford River the shining waters become troubled and disturbed and the little waves beat angrily upon the sandy shores.
-- Frenchman’s Creek, Daphne du Maurier
When the girl came rushing up the steps, I decided she was wearing far too many clothes.
-- The Silver Pigs, Lindsey Davis
It was the egret, flying out of the lemon grove, that started it.
-- The Moonspinners, Mary Stewart
The lad had the deep, burning eyes of a zealot.
-- The Prince of Midnight, Laura Kinsale
It’s still my favorite book in all the world.
--The Princess Bride, William Goldman
“Christmas won’t be Christmas without any presents,” grumbled Jo, lying on the rug.
--Little Women, Louisa May Alcott
Charles Howard had the feel of a gigantic onrushing machine: You had to either climb on or leap out of the way.
--Seabiscuit, Laura Hillenbrand
We had been wandering so long I had forgotten what it was like to live within walls or sleep through the night.
--The Dovekeepers, Alice Hoffman
So there you go, a few of my favorite story portals -- what's your favorite opening line in a novel?
Susan